Is this beginning to my story okay?
Question by ✿ℓιттℓε мσçĸιηgĵåү☀: Is this beginning to my story okay?
Okay so, my story is about Vampires, no, there not sparkly or anything, they’re evil.
Can you tell me if I have any punctuation missing or spelling mistakes?
Also can you tell me if you like it or not, if not please tell my why and how I can improve.
I stared into the accusing eyes of the boy, which were wide with fright and fear. The burning sensation calmed almost immediately when his blood filled my mouth, such a delicious taste, so worth it. “N-no! Please no!” The boy pleaded, tears streaking his paling face. If I had any liking towards humans, I would be disgusted with myself and let go. But humans are not nice, nor do they welcome us vampires with warmth, as we would them if they apologised for their miss-doing hundreds of years ago.
As the lifeless boy fell to the ground, I wiped my blood covered lips with the back of my hand and turned around. “Ludis! We are finished here. I have hunted, so we may return to the house.” I called to my worrior, just as he had started stalking a teenage girl, more or less the same age as me. Ludis turned around, breathing heavily, if I had not been so familiar with him, he would scare me. But that is his job, a protector, to shoo off any person or vampire who wished to harm us. “Of course, Selene.” He said, bending over and saluting me. “Lead the way, worrior.” I instructed, linking my pale arm through his. “Selene, I’m sorry but I haven’t fed. To protect you and your family, I need to stay strong. I don’t want anything to happen.” Ludis said, and he looked towards me warily, as if he was afraid of my reaction. I do not want him to be afraid, he’s like family. We all love him in a friendly way. “Ludis, don’t be afraid of me. You can feed, mother and Calira are going hunting tomorrow. If you can’t hold on till then, you may go out later tonight before sunrise by yourself and hunt.” He nodded firmly and took my hand as we walked through the damp forrest towards home.
BTW; I know about the paragraph thing, its Yahoo.
So yeah, tell me what you think, please?
Thanks a lot 
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Oh and is Selene a good vampire name?
If not, please suggest some!! 
Ludis is a name x]
Y’know?
I know about the speech, it is yahoo, it’s not like that on wordpad x]
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Answer by uɐɟʎqɹıʞ
Yes you misspelled ludis it isnt a word
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What Changes EXACTLY have been made to the Snipers in Black Ops thus far?
Question by : What Changes EXACTLY have been made to the Snipers in Black Ops thus far?
It’s quite cute that Treyarch goes around with their patch notes saying “Snipers were fine tuned.”
Well that’s all fine and dandy but I need some hard core facts and numbers to be satisfied with actual changes. I’m a sniping lover, but even I knew that sniping was a real problem in Modern Warfare 2. I could not stand the sleight of hand pro kids that run around barely bringing up the scope and firing.. I mean the target wasn’t even visible in their damn scope and I’m happy that Treyarch has stepped up to say “No, we are not going to let 12 year olds do that on our game..”
But when it first came out legitimate offensive sniping was not even possible. Granted that’s fine in Battlefield or Homefront which are more team oriented large map games, but the Call of Duty series has always been more inclined to satisfy and reward the individual player despite the team game modes.. plus we all know realism is out the door otherwise a shot to the arm or foot would probably kill you considering the momentum and sphere of energy which distorts and twists the air around the bullet as it spins is enough to rip a man in half when shot from 1000 yards away.
All I want to know is, if any of you know, what changes were made to the snipers? How much percentage wise were the cross hairs changed upon zooming in? How much time must elapse before the bullet will take on the designated path by the scope? I know before it was somewhere around 2 seconds, then they dropped it to like 0.5 seconds.. or something like that.. I only vaguely remember some videos I saw on youtube concerning it and I cannot relocate them plus quite a bit of time has passed since those videos so I’m sure some more changes have been made.
Does anyone have any information regarding this topic at all really?
Best answer:
Answer by Penderien
All I know is that sniping (other than hardcore mode) is worthless in Black Ops.
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How to end this essay in a unique way?
Question by : How to end this essay in a unique way?
I’m writing an essay on the book “The Most Dangerous Game.” You don’t even have to know what the book’s about to answer this question. Please just scan over my essay and suggest a way for me to end it. Thanks!
Have you ever been close to dying? Rainsford was being hunted in the story “The Most Dangerous Game,” and came very close to dying. In the story, the author makes the reader sympathize with Rainsford by the way he makes a connection between Rainsford and the reader.
In the story it says, “Rainsford’s impulse was to hurl himself down like a panther but he saw the general’s right hand held something metallic- a small automatic pistol” (Connell 231). I’m pretty sure that most people who read this quote will sympathize with Rainsford because if you knew someone was trying to kill you, you’d be pretty terrorized. Almost everyone has a fear of dying and so the author adds that in there to make a connection with Rainsford and the reader.
“Rainsford froze there, every muscle tensed for a spring” (Connell 231). That quote shows the reader that Rainsford has the same feelings as they do. We have all felt terror in our lives so it makes it easy for the reader to understand what Rainsford is going through and to sympathize with him.
Ever played hide and seek and got really scared because the person seeking you was close by Rainsford basically went through the same thing. In the story it reads: “They would be on him any minute now. His mind worked frantically” (Connell 231). The reader can feel how Rainsford felt and they can sympathize with him.
CONCLUDING PARAGRAPH!
Thank you so much!
Best answer:
Answer by Angel
just sumarise the whole book in it!
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What would a cheetah be like as a hunting partner?
Question by : What would a cheetah be like as a hunting partner?
Alright, I’ve been wondering this for a while. I understand cheetahs are wild, and I am not at all contemplating actually hunting with one. So please no “animal rights” activists, in all honesty it’s just not what I’m looking for. I am interested in falconry, and have seen (documentary http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NevenDIp95A ) that long ago in India, as well other places in the middle east, cheetahs were actually used to hunt. I’ve wondered if anyone on Yahoo might have been with cheetahs, worked with them at a habitat, seen them, or live by them to answer my question on their temperament and ability to get along with humans, as information on this topic is hard to come by, considering that there are so few cheetahs and nobody really hunts with them anymore. Again, I DO NOT feel compelled to actually hunt with a cheetah, I just wanted to know. ~Thanks1
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Answer by gymnastgirl
Well, it would probably pounce on your er…. hunting animals which would help you. So.. I guess it would be helpful. But I don’t really know becuz I don’t hunt. I’m just imagining.
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In “Good will Hunting” what personality disorder the main character has?
Question by totopete2000: In “Good will Hunting” what personality disorder the main character has?
Best answer:
Answer by krazy kid
i dont think he has a personality disorder, he just went through a tough time as a kid because of the abuse and stuff.
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Good Will Hunting Movie Clip – watch all clips j.mp click to subscribe j.mp Will (Matt Damon) butts in when a yuppie MIT student tries to insult Chuckie (Ben Affleck). TM & © Miramax Films (2012) Cast: Matt Damon, Ben Affleck, Minnie Driver, Casey Affleck, Cole Hauser, Scott William Winters Director: Gus Van Sant MOVIECLIPS YouTube Channel: j.mp Join our Facebook page: j.mp Follow us on Twitter: j.mp Buy Movie: amzn.to Producer: Su Armstrong, Lawrence Bender, Jonathan Gordon, Chris Moore, Scott Mosier, Kevin Smith, Bob Weinstein, Harvey Weinstein Screenwriter: Matt Damon, Ben Affleck Film Description: Matt Damon and Ben Affleck co-scripted and star in this drama, set in Boston and Cambridge, about rebellious 20-year-old MIT janitor Will Hunting (Damon), gifted with a photographic memory, who hangs out with his South Boston bar buddies, his best friend Chuckie (Affleck), and his affluent British girlfriend Skylar (Minnie Driver). After MIT professor Lambeau (Stellan Skarsgard) stumps students with a challenging math formula on a hallway blackboard, Will anonymously leaves the correct solution, prompting Lambeau to track the elusive young genius. As Will’s problems with the police escalate, Lambeau offers an out, but with two conditions — visits to a therapist and weekly math sessions. Will agrees to the latter but refuses to cooperate with a succession of therapists. Lambeau then contacts his former classmate, therapist Sean McGuire (Robin Williams), an instructor at …
What qualifies as a sport???
Question by Tyler: What qualifies as a sport???
Now and days i think things being classified as “sports” are getting a little out of line… i will quote george carlin here for a second “swimming is not a sport swimming is a way to keep from drowning! running isnt a sport i could run to the sport for some milk but its not a f***** sport! fishing isnt a sport fishing is a means of survival” how can you say things like poker fishing and that is a sport along with darts? i think the sports that are really sports are football baseball basketball hockey soccer with a few exceptions such as european type of sports such as maybe rugby cricket and stuff… nascar, cheerleading, pool, bowling, running, fishing, hunting, racing (bike, car, motorcycle, anything for that matter), and a few more are not sports to me… what do you think?
tennis is also a sport… golf is borderline but i think its more of a popular game than an acctual athletic type of sport
Best answer:
Answer by ♥Ice_Princess♥
basketball qualifies as a sport lol
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What’s it with People and their guns? And Hunting?
Question by A: What’s it with People and their guns? And Hunting?
I just don’t understand how people would want guns. So people dont want to get rid of em because they want it for protection, what about hunting? Does it really not phase certain people when they kill an innocent creature for no reason at all, except to put the head on their wall? Why is it a “sport” to kill things for fun, our world is sick, and our society is just falling apart. What do you think?
Today I was talking with my friends, and one was saying how her uncle gave her 13 y/o cousin a gun to kill a pig. I guess in some way a pig isn’t as bad as a deer or somethin, but when I reacted shocked, my other friend was like dude, by 13 you should have killed something. Is it just cuz im from the North and pretty Liberal as well, or isn’t it just inhumane to take a life away from an animal. They aren’t people, but why as humans cant we share the earth with nature and other forms of life, and while we are superior, why do we feel that gives us the power to kill?
Humans are becoming over populated as well, does that mean hunters should start killing peple to keep the population down and issues from coming forward?
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Answer by u r dumb
I agree with you .It seems that some societies promote it to an extendt that they belive unless they own a gun they are not free and have an civil liberties.
I don’t agree with that because I feel better living in a country where not any luny can get ahold of a gun and do random act and from a documentary I was looking at these people go gun crazy and if they see anything move in the night in their backyard they shoot without asking (leading to horrible accidents)
I don’t find killing animals a sport either .Its just plain cruel and to give a gun to a young child where really helping it from a young age loose its sensitivivity to the act of killing.Sadly with movies sometimes they don’t even realize when they get older the difference of killing humans in the mix either 
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If the PETA types got hunting banned…?
Question by Don’t call me dude: If the PETA types got hunting banned…?
… and the right-wingers succeeded in their quest to destroy our already-too-small food aid and welfare programs…
What do these two groups propose that the rural poor EAT?
There are literally MILLIONS of people in the U.S. who live in places a Euro, for instance, would think of as wilderness. For many of them, hunting puts food on the table.
In the U.S., hunting is not just an upper-class thing, like in England, or just a “sport.”
Whipsawed by the “right” and the “left,” and kept prisoners by agribusiness, what are the rural poor supposed to do?
Just go away and quietly starve to death?
The U.S. has the least extensive and most poorly-funded social welfare programs in the industrialized world. So, we refuse to help our people, and we ALSO want to stop them from helping themselves?
This is crazy.
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I can’t believe there’s actually someone who thinks people don’t go hungry in America. Do you wear a blindfold when you drive through poor neighborhoods?
And don’t tell me the poor don’t hunt. I’ve seen men with holes in their jeans counting out coins on the hardware store counter, buying white box.
Best answer:
Answer by me
These are the same idiots that want to put up memorials to road kill in Australia
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Are Ouija boards harmless or dangerous?
Question by Angela: Are Ouija boards harmless or dangerous?
I came a cross a book I haven’t read yet, and here’s the summary:
The title of the book is “Ouija, The Most Dangerous Game.”
“The First Book To Take A Hard Look At The Phenomenon Called “The Ouija Board”Is it just a game? When you ask the Ouija board a question, who is it that answers? What about those stories of Ouija-inspired prophecy and clairvoyance? What are the dangers of the Ouija board? Do you know the stories of Ouija-inspired murders, madness, obsession and possession? Exalted by some, condemned by others, there’s no doubt the Ouija is controversial. In this fascinating book Stoker Hunt investigates the history and legacy of this “Mystic Talking Oracle.” ”
When I was a pre-teen I played with a Ouija board a couple times, and it didn’t seem to have any bad effects. But I’ve heard some scary stories (including a first-hand account from my devoutly religious Grandmother) of things that have happened to people who have used Ouija boards?
What has your experience been with these things?
I’d like to think it’s just a silly board game made by Milton Bradley, but why do some people swear that bad things come of it? Does it really conjure evil spirits, or is it just the makings of some overactive imaginations because people who play with it WANT to see scary things happen?
Best answer:
Answer by Captain Peacock
They’re harmless. The only people who think they are dangerous are deluded religious morons.
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How can I find a good plastic surgeon in Orlando, Florida?
Question by icentan: How can I find a good plastic surgeon in Orlando, Florida?
I am thinking about getting some sort of facial surgery but I am not sure what. I have had plastic surgery (breast implants) before and, after a long hunt for the “right” surgeon, I chose one that treated me like a mcdonalds customer…I was in and out in 20 minutes and he didn’t care that he left my nipples crooked. Gravity and sun damage is taking it’s toll on my flat, fat cheeked face, and I am starting to look like the droopy cheeked dog huckleberry hound…just like a kid in 8th grade predicted. I refuse to let the kid predict my future…but I don’t want to make the same mistake I made before.
Word of mouth is not really an option since I don’t know anyone in this town and can’t exactly start a conversation asking someone if they have had plastic surgery.
What can I do?
Best answer:
Answer by pjsparkles96
Go to your local hospital and consult with the plastic surgeon…
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