Q&A: Does this part in my story make you want to read more?
Question by ~oO*Lex*Oo~: Does this part in my story make you want to read more?
SNEAK PEAK
SOMEWHERE IN CH. 17
I stared blankly through the window. I wanted to sleep. I wanted a bed. I wanted to go HOME. The man came in with a cup of hot cocoa. I took it solemnly from him. He smiled weakly. Arron was sitting across from me, in a chair made out of bear skin. I thought that was gross. But I smiled sickly.
“So you guys were lost in the woods?” He asked. His voice was very deep, and he seemed like the indian type.
“We were looking for the Torch Wood cave.” I explained, my voice shaking.The man raised an eyebrow.
“Do you know what kind of place that is?” He murmured. I shook me head. He sat down, too.
“Werewolves.” He whispered. I stiffened a little. But I wasn’t freaked out, compared to what had happened and what i have seen already. I saw Arron’s jaw clench. I decided to speak up.
“I’m not afraid.” I whispered, and looked at the floor. Arron snickered.
“Really?” Asked the man. I nodded.
“What’s your name?” I asked, a little louder than necessary. The man pressed his lips in a hard line.
“Sean.” I nodded again.
“Luna.”
Arron didn’t speak.
“This is my friend, Arron.” I told Sean. (Shawn).
“So are you indian?” I asked rudely, though I had no intention of being rude or sudden. He chuckled darkly.
“Something like that. There’s a whole story, a little long I warn you.”
I leaned forward eagerly. “I can keep up.” He chuckled again before speaking.
“First, Luna, you must understand that back then there were rules, too. But those rules weren’t fair.
“I came from a small pack called ‘The Krass.’ Remember what I told you about that Torch Wood place?” I nodded, deep in thought. He began again.
“Werewolves. The Krass was a werewolf pack, and I was in it. I wasn’t the leader until I was older. We hunted when we needed to hunt, and we did everything we were told. By our master of course.” Sean’s eyes flickered to me, then to the fire. “And who was your leader?” I asked, barely listening to the crackling fire that licked the air. Sean grinned.
“The werewolf king. His name was Ario. We all bowed to his rules. Back then there were evil spirits, Luna. And you need to understand that even now, where ever is good- Is evil. The Ario was a werewolf, not a spirit.Our tribe was an indian ledgend. We hunted around the world, until vampires came along. We are mortal enemies, Luna. They told us to stay off their land. So we did. But then one day, one of the werewolves in my tribe got angry, and killed a vampire. Back then, it was illegal to kill an immortal if you are an immortal as well. The tribe was punished, and half of our tribe was killed, and half of the vampires were killed. They turned to spirits, and lived with Ario. I was lucky. But ten years later, he made a law. Like a peace treaty you might say. We weren’t to ever touch a vampire again. The same the other way. But then, a vampire lashed out on me.” Sean put his fingers under his eye, where there was a long scar I hadn’t noticed. He continued.
“The Ario came, and I watched the Ario kill the vampire. Then, he told me it was my trun. I hadn’t touched him, so he let me go. Ever since then, I was the only one left in the tribe. So the tribe was therefore broken. I’m sure in Torch Wood cave there’s a new Krass Tribe though, that will take on my Tribe’s responsibilities.”
We all stared into a fire, and I had barely noticed Arron was sitting next to me now.
I had so many questions to ask Sean.
“Do the spirits kill?” I asked, in a low voice. Sean shook his head.
“Sadly, yes.” I frowned.
“Did you ever see Ario again? Or your Tribe? Or even the vampires?” I said, quickly.
Sean smiled, darkly. “I never see Ario. And the spirits of my tribe are long gone. But every now and again, I sniff a bloodsucker.” He sniffed in the air for measure, then he looked lividly at Arron. That’s when my heart sank, and I couldn’t see. “Luna!” I heard Arron call, then there was blackness.
Thats a sneak peak of my newest story Shattered. RATE AND DO YOU WANT TO READ MORE? Would you buy the book? Dont tell me the grammar mistakes, I know. But is the story good itself? I didnt copy Twilight, either. If you read the whole thing, its irratically different. 
Best answer:
Answer by Summer
It seems like a great thing that you’ve got going for yourself here! I would buy it! Is Arron a vampire or something? Haha now I really want to know what happens next…..
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Its the first part of rifle season and I’m a beginner,Have ANY advice?
I am just now old enough to hunt by myself. My dad took me hunting a few times but not enough to really know what to do. I love to be in the wood and fish, but just having some feelings that i don’t have what it take to get the job done.
ANY advice??
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- Owl
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- Fox
- Lion
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- Jackal
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the cattle dog mix is going to eat them…you can just tell it is what is on his mind..i have tried leashing him, exposing him to the cats through a kennel cage, holding them and petting them while someone else has him on a leash next to me…rewarding him for not plunging toward them in these instances…then, as soon as he gets the opportunity…he is after them with “that look” in his rabbit hunting run… i have also tried bring the kittens into the house inside a cage, thought the dogs would accept them as pack if they were brought inside and ate while the dogs were eating…noting i have tried has worked….perhaps the cats will be tough country cats and outrun the dogs, but i do not want to bet their lives on it..anyone have any good ideas how to train my dogs to leave the cats alone? please no lectures about letting my dogs eat wild rabbits…it is what some dogs do and have done for a long long time…
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if the dogs are outside, so am I…these dogs are my kids…they go outside to poop…they go outside with me on the way to garage, on the way to get out the gate on leash for walks…the reason we have enclosed the entire property with a fence is for the safety of our “yard ornaments” lol…who are also bed cushions, pillows, sofa pillows and part of the family..my dogs know I am the pack leader, and all but one has given up the urge to eat the cats..if i left him unattended i would not know his behavior…that is the reason i am asking the question, to get help…not sarcasm.
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